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請將下列的一段中文翻譯成通順、達意且前後連貫的英文。
上個月的藝術節上,雕塑(sculpture)社的同學用一整塊木頭雕刻出一座真人大小的雕像。校長稱讚這是一件充滿藝術氣息的創作,連路過的家長也停下來拍照。在學校的禮堂裡,合唱團(chorus)和銅管樂團輪流演出,由音樂老師擔任指揮。演出結束時,所有表演者向觀眾鞠躬,掌聲久久沒有停止。看到這一切,我覺得藝術不只屬於少數人,而是屬於每一個人。那天,我答應自己,以後要多參加藝術活動。
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At last month's art festival, members of the sculpture club carved a life-size statue from one piece of wood. The principal praised it as an artistic creation, and even parents passing by stopped to take photos. In the school hall, the chorus and the brass band performed in turn, with the music teacher as the conductor. When the show ended, all the performers bowed to the audience, and the applause did not stop for a long time. Seeing all of this, I felt that art is not only for a few people but for everyone. That day, I promised myself that I would take part in more art events.
上個月的藝術節上,雕塑(sculpture)社的同學用一整塊木頭雕刻出一座真人大小的雕像。
At last month's art festival, members of the sculpture club carved a life-size statue from one piece of wood.
last month's art festival 用 's 表示所屬的時間(last month 的藝術節)。carve A from B 是「用 B 雕刻出 A」,carve 的過去式是 carved。sculpture 是「雕塑(藝術)」,statue 是「雕像(作品)」;life-size 是「與真人(實物)等大的」。from 後面接材料(one piece of wood)。
校長稱讚這是一件充滿藝術氣息的創作,連路過的家長也停下來拍照。
The principal praised it as an artistic creation, and even parents passing by stopped to take photos.
praise A as B 是「稱讚 A 是 B」。an artistic creation:artistic 以母音開頭,所以冠詞用 an;creation 是「創作、作品」。passing by 是現在分詞,修飾 parents,等於 who were passing by。stop to + V 是「停下來去做…」(stop + V-ing 則是「停止做…」)。
在學校的禮堂裡,合唱團(chorus)和銅管樂團輪流演出,由音樂老師擔任指揮。
In the school hall, the chorus and the brass band performed in turn, with the music teacher as the conductor.
in turn 是「輪流」。brass band 是「銅管樂團」,brass 在這裡指銅管樂器(黃銅製)。with + 名詞 + as + 名詞 表示「由…擔任…」。conductor 是「指揮」,指揮這個動作是 conduct。hall 是「大廳、禮堂」。
演出結束時,所有表演者向觀眾鞠躬,掌聲久久沒有停止。
When the show ended, all the performers bowed to the audience, and the applause did not stop for a long time.
bow 當動詞是「鞠躬」,bow to sb 表示向某人鞠躬,過去式 bowed,念作 /baʊ/;bow 當名詞「蝴蝶結、弓」時念 /boʊ/,意思與發音都不同。audience 是集合名詞,這裡當作整體,不加 s。applause 是不可數名詞,不加 a。
看到這一切,我覺得藝術不只屬於少數人,而是屬於每一個人。
Seeing all of this, I felt that art is not only for a few people but for everyone.
Seeing all of this 是分詞構句,等於 When I saw all of this,主詞與後面的 I 相同才可以這樣省略。not only A but (also) B 連接兩個對等的片語(for a few people 與 for everyone),詞性要一致。a few people 是「少數幾個人」;everyone 當單數。
那天,我答應自己,以後要多參加藝術活動。
That day, I promised myself that I would take part in more art events.
promise sb that + 子句:主要動詞用過去式 promised,所以 that 子句裡用 would 表示「過去所想的未來」。take part in 是「參加」,後面接活動名詞。more art events 是比較級,表示「更多的」。
These days, many teenagers listen to music and look at paintings on their phones instead of going out to see them. I understand why: a concert ticket can be expensive, and a gallery may be too distant from home. However, I think we lose something important when we only watch a screen. For one thing, a phone does not show a painting's real size. At an exhibition last spring, I stood in front of a huge painting for ten minutes. I saw details I had never noticed online. For another, a pianist's soft melody feels different in a quiet hall, where the whole audience holds its breath.
Of course, phones are efficient, but no screen can copy the rhythm of a live opera or a conductor conducting an orchestra. Good art deserves a real audience. So I plan to visit the gallery in my town, which exhibits local students' work for free.
現在許多青少年用手機聽音樂、看畫作,而不是出門去欣賞。我能理解:音樂會的門票可能很貴,美術館也可能離家很遠。不過,我認為如果只看螢幕,我們會失去一些重要的東西。首先,手機無法呈現一幅畫的真實大小。去年春天,我在一場展覽裡站在一幅巨大的畫前十分鐘。我看見了在網路上從沒注意到的細節。其次,一位鋼琴家輕柔的旋律,在安靜的廳堂裡感覺很不一樣,在那裡所有觀眾都屏住了呼吸。
當然,手機很有效率,但沒有任何螢幕能複製現場歌劇的節奏,或是指揮帶領樂團的畫面。好的藝術值得一位真實的觀眾。所以我打算去鎮上的美術館,那裡免費展出當地學生的作品。
本題屬於「現象+看法型」:先用一句話描述現象(年輕人用手機欣賞藝術),接著表明自己的看法(只看螢幕會失去重要的東西)。第一段先體諒對方(I understand why…:票貴、地點遠),再用 However 轉出看法,並用 For one thing / For another 提出兩個原因:手機無法呈現畫作的真實大小(用去年看展的親身經驗當例子)、現場音樂帶來的共同體驗。第二段用 Of course 承認手機的方便,再用 but 回到自己的看法,最後以個人的行動計畫收尾(去鎮上的美術館看展)。這類題目的關鍵是「現象要寫得簡短、看法要明確、原因要有例子」。
However, I think we lose something important when we only watch a screen.
先用 I understand why 體諒對方(現象的原因),再用 However 轉出自己的看法,是「現象+看法型」常見的轉折方式。when 引導的子句說明失去的條件。
I know exercise is tiring. However, I think it is worth the effort.
我知道運動很累。不過,我認為這很值得努力。
saw details I had never noticed online
過去完成式 had never noticed 表示在「看到細節」之前從來沒有注意過,兩件事有先後。details I had never noticed 省略了關係代名詞 that,修飾 details。
I found a shop I had never visited before.
我發現一間以前從沒去過的店。
a quiet hall, where the whole audience holds its breath
where 引導非限定關係子句,補充說明地點(a quiet hall),前面加逗號。audience 當整體時,用單數代名詞 its。hold one's breath 是「屏住呼吸」。
We went to the park, where we had a picnic.
我們去了公園,在那裡野餐。
phones are efficient, but no screen can copy the rhythm of a live opera
Of course … but … 先承認手機的優點,再用 but 帶出自己的看法。no screen can… 是全部否定的說法,語氣比 a screen cannot… 更強。
Cars are fast, but no car can fly.
汽車很快,但沒有一輛車能飛。
a conductor conducting an orchestra
conducting an orchestra 是現在分詞片語,從 a conductor who is conducting… 簡化而來,修飾前面的 conductor。簡化後句子更簡潔。
Look at the boy playing the piano.
看那個正在彈鋼琴的男孩。
So I plan to visit the gallery in my town
So 放在句首,引導前一句(好的藝術值得真實的觀眾)所帶來的結果,後面接自己的計畫。plan to + V 是「計畫做…」。which 引導的非限定關係子句補充說明 gallery,前面要加逗號。
I was tired. So I went to bed early.
我很累,所以早早上床睡覺。
| 單字 | 本回用法 |
|---|---|
| artistic | an artistic creation 充滿藝術氣息的創作;an artistic person 有藝術天分的人 |
| bow | bow to the audience 向觀眾鞠躬(v.);bow 當名詞也有「蝴蝶結、弓」的意思,發音不同 |
| brass | a brass band 銅管樂團;brass instruments 銅管樂器(brass 原指黃銅) |
| carve | carve a statue from wood 用木頭雕出雕像;carve 也有「切(肉)」的意思 |
| chorus | the school chorus 學校合唱團;in chorus 齊聲地(本回為「合唱團」) |
| concert | go to a concert 去聽音樂會;a concert ticket 音樂會門票 |
| conduct | conduct an orchestra 指揮樂團;conduct 也有「進行、舉辦」的意思(conduct a survey 進行調查) |
| conductor | a conductor 指揮;a bus conductor 公車車掌(本回為「樂團指揮」) |
| creation | an artistic creation 藝術創作;the creation of a world 一個世界的誕生 |
| exhibit | exhibit works 展出作品(v.);exhibit 當名詞則指「展覽品」 |
| exhibition | visit an exhibition 參觀展覽;an art exhibition 藝術展 |
| gallery | an art gallery 美術館、畫廊;the National Gallery 國家美術館 |
| melody | a soft melody 輕柔的旋律;the melody of a song 一首歌的旋律 |
| opera | a live opera 現場歌劇;go to the opera 去看歌劇 |
| pianist | a pianist 鋼琴家;a famous pianist 著名的鋼琴家 |
| rhythm | the rhythm of music 音樂的節奏;a strong rhythm 強烈的節奏 |
| sculpture | a sculpture club 雕塑社;a bronze sculpture 銅雕作品(sculpture 可指雕塑藝術或作品) |
| statue | a life-size statue 真人大小的雕像;the Statue of Liberty 自由女神像 |
| last | last month 上個月(adj.);字表詞性為動詞「持續」,本回用法為形容詞,指「剛過去的」 |
| distant | a distant place 遙遠的地方;be distant from home 離家很遠 |
| efficient | an efficient way 有效率的方法;efficient 常用來形容人或工具 |
| deserve | deserve more than … 值得比…更多;deserve respect 值得尊敬 |
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